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--- pc:arthur_moore [2025/10/29 19:19] – [apparence] 78.129.28.155
+++ pc:arthur_moore [2025/11/01 22:54] (current) – [Appearance] 78.129.28.155
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 ====== Arthur Moore ======
- An old doctor and investigator from the past
+ An old doctor and investigator from the past.
 |□      |doctor|
-|□      |red cross volontaire|
+|□      |red cross volunteer|
 |□      |investigator|
 |□      |witnessed the mythos|
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 |medicine     |+3|
-|psychologie  |+2|
+|psychology   |+2|
 |sword combat |+2|
 |sense motive |+1|
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 |bio-chemistry|+1|
 |lockpicking  |+0|
-|anthropologie|+0|
+|anthropology |+0|
 |stealth      |+0|
 |occultism    |+0|
-======apparence======
+======Appearance======
-An old man with a canes and an old cavalry saber from the civil war, wearing a fancy waistcoat with a old pocket watch and a button down shirt below he carries an old medical purse containing all the tool for some emergency operation, including a saw and chloroform
+An old man with a sword inside a cane, wearing a fancy waistcoat with a old pocket watch and a button down shirt below.  He carries an old medical purse containing all the tools for emergency operations, including a saw and chloroform.
 ======Story======
-	He grew up in Lewiston Maine in the 1880 and studied in medicine the Miskatonic university where he got
+He grew up in Lewiston, Maine in the 1880s and studied medicine in the Miskatonic university, where he got
-doctorate, he then decided to volunteer with the red cross for the added experience and went into the Congo
+a doctorate, he then decided to volunteer with the Red Cross for the added experience and went into the Congo
-to vaccinate the local population, he ended up being forced to come back to the US after insulting the
+to vaccinate the local population. He ended up being forced to come back to the US after insulting the
-local authority over the treatment of the local population.
+local authorities over the treatment of the local population.
- In the us he started working as a doctor where he
+In the US he started working as a doctor where he
-made a lot of money, he then decide to  use that money to travel in the south of the us to provide free
+made a lot of money, then decided to  use that money to travel around the south of the US to provide free
-healthcare for the most poorest people in those region, usually in black neighborhood.
+healthcare for the most poorest people in the region, usually in black neighborhoods.
- In there he met a group of detective investigating the murder of a black men that the police had ignored for years and decided to join them where together they uncover the corruption of the police chief that was part of the klans who murdered the man.
+In there he met a group of detectives investigating the murder of a black man that the police had ignored for years and decided to join them. Together they uncovered the corruption of the police chief that was part of the Klans who murdered the man.
 After that investigation he decided to close his main office to focus entirely in helping the poor and working for
 that detective agency.
-While working for them, he ended up encountering truly bizarre stuff, thing beyond normal, he nearly got eaten
+While working for them, he ended up encountering truly bizarre stuff, thing beyond the normal: he nearly got eaten
-and digested by a house, talked with head in a jar, escape and fought mutated dog in a cave and fought some abomination
+and digested by a house, talked with head in a jar, escaped and fought mutated dogs in a cave and fought some abomination
-that the klans had summoned.
+that the Klans had summoned.
-His last investigation ended up in disaster tho, as he was swollen by a tower of non-euclidien proportion and spit back
+His last investigation ended up in disaster tho, as he was swallowed by a tower of non-euclidean proportions and spit back
-much later, at the time where his friend where dead, if not from some monster then by the passage of time, he then spend
+much later, at the time where his friends are dead, if not from some monster then by the passage of time. He then spent
-a decade readjusting from this new time, with his doctorate now invalid, and the rest of his stuff sold as he was declare dead, he decided that he needed to make some money again and so restarted an investigation business taking any job that is offered
+a decade readjusting from this new time, with his doctorate now invalid, and the rest of his stuff sold as he was declare dead. He decided that he needed to make some money again and so restarted an investigation business taking any job that is offered.