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 The Veil is a very complex working in the [[place:Great Dream]] of the [[place:Oniria]] time branch that causes most people living there to ignore anything that's not considered mundane.
-The results are pretty comprehensive; if a timeline exploration team from [[place:Rigasia]] steps in there, people will confuse the portal for a mirage, or in extreme cases plainly refuse to acknowledge their existence, and would insist that the explorers are cosplayers, or spies from a different nation.
+The results are pretty comprehensive; if a timeline exploration team from [[place:Rigasia]] steps in there, people will confuse the portal for a mirage, or in extreme cases plainly refuse to acknowledge its existence; and would insist that the explorers are cosplayers, or spies from a different nation.
-Only a small percentage of the population of those Earths has managed to pierce the veil and become aware of what's going on below it.
+Only a small percentage of the population of those Earths has managed to pierce the Veil and become aware of what's going on below it.